Monday, April 9, 2012

My Story- Preview

Hey guys. I wanted to post a bit from the story I'm writing. This story is just for fun, but I'm really liking it so far and thought I would share a bit with you. Here is just a tiny bit from it. If you would like to see more in the future, let me know. Please leave feedback!! 

“Run” I scream. “Run and don’t stop!”
I keep running. I won’t stop. I can’t stop. Behind me I can hear the others. If they don’t move faster, they’re not going to make it. We’re not going to make it. Going back without the others is not an option. We’re going back together." 

This was written by me, Angelica M.
100% my idea!! This is Copyrighted. 


  1. Wow not only are you the epitome of cute, you damn sure can write! I'm not just saying it; in all honesty, I think it's well done. It captivated my attention with just that little sample. My immagination was going haywire, I want to know what they were running from! Zombies? Aliens? Ninjas? It sounds interresting. Also, don't forget to copyright it.

    As a writer myself, I use a program called Dramatica Pro -- this program actually helps you map out your story with a series of questions. There's also, Outline 4D which can also help. So I hope you continue writing it. Publish it. I'll be the first in line to get it. Cheers!

  2. Great Job so far. I want more!!

  3. Hey, you posted this on my birthday! It must have been your present to me :D I really like it, so far. Lots of questions and I really hope we get to see more. Of course, I advise caution with putting things online before you publish them. It's really easy to steal someone's work online. The risk is always there. You don't have to worry about this, cuz there's really nothing to steal. On my blog I have links to all of my book ideas. I want to share them all, but I have to be vague on most of them. I just don't want to risk someone using my idea.